Sorry, been busy >_>
Yeah, the ending seem good but, they will most likely change it from what you have to fill in the loose ends, because this is the final chapter of the series and you want all cliffhangers resolved. Now that i think about it, besides the final action scene, I think the ending should give less or more detail depending on how you did, about making 4 endings. But all in all, this is good stuff. (We should right this stuff together ^_^)